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12 July 2008 @ 12:47 pm
Title: Can you tell?
Author: Leeni (xx_selene_xx )
Pairing: Callie/Erica obviously ;D
Summary: Erica wonders if Callie can tell..

I had another dream about you last night.
Can you tell by the way I look at you in the elevator?

I really do wish we were together.
Can you tell by the uncomfortable laughter, and silence that follows it?

I'm jealous that you're dancing with the resident manwhore like that.
Can you tell by the way I drink my wine like there's no tomorrow?

I really do want a threesome; minus Sloane.
Can you tell by the way I rest my head on your shoulder when we tease him?

I didn't kiss you just to tease him.
Can you tell by the way I stroke your cheek with my thumb while our lips are pressed together?

I'm so relieved when you kiss me in the parking lot.
You can tell by the way I melt into your arms, and you laugh.

And when I see Sloane watching us from the hospital entrance, I know.

He can tell.

I love you.

Current Location: Mom's
Current Mood: complacentcomplacent
Erin: Callie Torresdocwarnerfan on July 12th, 2008 12:56 am (UTC)
Aww this was cute!
Erindocwarnerfan on July 12th, 2008 12:57 am (UTC)
btw love your icon!
Leeni: Steph; redxx_selene_xx on July 12th, 2008 01:08 am (UTC)
Teehee, thanks! It was inspired at work ;D and I had to wait about five hours to write it down, lolol.

Also, thank you :D I thought it suited the mood of the fic particularly well :D
Erin: Callie4docwarnerfan on July 12th, 2008 01:10 am (UTC)
I'll bet you couldn't wait to write it huh and your welcome!
ellipsisoveruse on July 12th, 2008 01:17 am (UTC)
I love this. It's so sweet and simple, yet so different from any of the other Callica stuff I've read. It really brought up each scenes in my mind, and I'm not usually a very visual person. I also love your userpic :) ♥♥♥
Leeni: RED ♥xx_selene_xx on July 12th, 2008 04:53 am (UTC)

Thank you~ I should have mentioned that you looked over this for me, for which I my have to use you (and abuse you, oh yeah ;D. Just jokes. Or am I?) more :D

ellipsisoveruse on July 12th, 2008 05:08 am (UTC)
Oh baby! ;) Happy to, any time. ♥

Have you un-friends-locked this? People couldn't get into it from the community.
Leeni: You suck D:xx_selene_xx on July 12th, 2008 05:12 am (UTC)
yeah ^_^;;
I realized and fixed it, lol.
I kinda feel like a douche now.

jayforeverjayforever on July 12th, 2008 09:56 am (UTC)
Awww, it's so sweet, i love it.
Reeferreefermadniss on July 12th, 2008 10:19 am (UTC)
Refreshingly different and well done! It's been a LONG time, but the form is pretty close to a sonnet, isn't it? Wow!
luxury_bus on July 12th, 2008 10:53 am (UTC)
Don't feel like a douche about earlier, ha. I love it, so it totally makes up for having to wait a couple of hours! =]
xtremedzxtremedz on July 12th, 2008 04:27 pm (UTC)
that was very sweet and well written. i love it!
Toryblamethegoddess on July 12th, 2008 09:40 pm (UTC)
That was amazing! I told you I loved your writing. You really expressed her feelings well, how the GA writers tried to, which makes it even more convincing.
Leenixx_selene_xx on July 12th, 2008 09:47 pm (UTC)

Thank you!

They're all moments from the episodes (moments of which I actually had screencaps in my head, lol)

hollysamantha: [sga] liz shimmerhollysamantha on July 13th, 2008 10:30 am (UTC)
*so* gorgeous. x
x0xmarie0x0x0xmarie0x0 on July 20th, 2008 10:51 pm (UTC)
Ohh, this is so cute !!
I love it ! ;)
Sapphicsapphicwarrior on September 7th, 2008 07:39 pm (UTC)
short but very very sweet. Loved it :-)
lestobiosis: eh she's beautifullestobiosis on October 14th, 2008 02:22 am (UTC)
This was wonderful.
Really... I've gone back to read it again a few times and I just keep thinking how touching it is. There's something about the line "He can tell." that just gets me...

This really is fantastic.